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This is at least several weeks if not months after where things leave off in chapter 6
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I have between the 17th day of the 9th month and the 14th day of the 12th month for all this to happen:
  
 
*Awkward convo with Joe, gets tablet for languaging
 
*Awkward convo with Joe, gets tablet for languaging

Revision as of 22:36, 24 July 2019

Editing Notes

Need to rewrite school segments to remove all references to opening history textbooks.

Need edits so all teachers get an introduction scene and all are on first-name basis with students. It's weird that history is taught by "Willy" and science is "Dr. Breddit" - add a fun note that he likes to be called 'dr.' but his first name because Briadwood encourages first-name basis.

Book2 Timeline

  • 6th day of 6th month school gets out
  • 9th day of the 7th month - Scarlet arrived back home
  • 24th day of the 8th month - Scarlet's birthday
  • 2nd of 9th month - school starts

Chapter 1

  • 13th day of 8th month - Night introduction, book starts.
  • 14th day of 8th month - knighting with King
  • 15th day of 8th month -
    • meeting with new school principle
    • First therapy appointment - if she's 14 in this scene, its after the 24th day of the 8th month
    • Meeting with Antiquarian Society - Some revision required, school hasn't started yet.

Chapter 2

  • 16th day of 8th month - Forging scene with Nal, could be day after chapter 1/dinner same night - editing Scarlet finding out DeLarual's are moving in.

Chapter 3

  • 17th day of 8th month - night time, Scarlet catches Relend in her room, sleeps next to Nal
  • 19th day of 8th month - leaving for camping trip, arrival at camp site, scarlet hurts face & kills bear
  • 20th day of 8th month - The following morning, the various denizens. Scarlet gets fish heads tossed on her. Relend gonna die.
  • 23rd day of 8th month - camping trip over heading home.

Chapter 4

  • 25th day of 8th month - Scarlet's birthday dinner
  • 29th day of 8th month - Kicking Relend out, second therapy visit
  • 2nd day of the 9nth month - first day of school
  • 5th day of 9th month - presentation to antiquarians
  • 6th day of 9th month - chat with Willy

Chapter 5

  • 6th day of 9th month - visit from Naomi
  • 7th day of 9th month - day out with Tess
  • 8th day of 9th month - Naomi leaves(no actual story)

Chapter 6

  • 12th day of 9th month - therapy
  • 13th day of 9th month - brings Nal to school, team meeting
  • 16th day of 9th month - heavy sword tryouts
  • 17th day of 9th month - lunch with friends
  • 21st day of 9th month - gala

Chapter 7

I have between the 17th day of the 9th month and the 14th day of the 12th month for all this to happen:

  • Awkward convo with Joe, gets tablet for languaging
  • presentation to class of expensive books/discovery of note
  • failed attempt to stay home for "Eieber Day" (note: this will fix a birth date for him)/heavy sword practice montage/visit with espy(big day)

Chapter 8

  • Scarlet tells teacher about book, gets info on note- rewrite this scene
    • Research in lab could be same or next day
  • showing Jason around her study - this has to be a saturday/letter writing to Tess

Chapter 9

  • school field trip, truth or dare
  • next day, chat with okin
  • some days later, back in Arindell at museum, in research lab later that evening
    • Scene with Nal up a tree, need to revise

Chapter 10

  • Visit with Tortuga
  • Days or weeks later, meeting with master auramancer and getting Nal back
  • 14th day of 12th month - knowledgium championships

Chapter 11

  • 21st day of 12th month - Heavy Sword finals, Chapter 11 starts
  • 22nd day of 12th month - "Scarlet made an annoyed sound in her throat"

Chapter 12

  • 2nd day of 1st month - "It took ten days to cross the spur" Note: should i bother mentioning it was Wash day? Nal and Scar dont care but relend might.
  • 8th day of 1st month - "“All right,” Scarlet announced. “You two sacks of crap stay here and try not to kill each other. I should be back in four or five days, a week, tops.”"
    • 9th day - "She sheltered for the first night "
    • 10th day - "Though it was only late afternoon, Scarlet camped at the tree-line on the second day."
    • 11th day - "At morning on the third day" - ends in "The wind picked up when the sun set"
    • 12th day - "Scarlet’s eyes were bloodshot and her face felt wind-burned by the time the first rays of the sun crept above the ridgeline to the east. "
    • 13th day - "It was late morning when Scarlet set out the following day"
  • 16th day of 1st month - "Scarlet paused to site on a few land marks"
  • 17th day of 1st month - "It took all morning to catch a few birds"
  • 18th day of 1st month - "They spent another full day filling their packs"

Chapter 13

Need check map, back in Uddin