Book 2 Timeline
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Editing Notes
Need to rewrite school segments to remove all references to opening history textbooks.
Need edits so all teachers get an introduction scene and all are on first-name basis with students. It's weird that history is taught by "Willy" and science is "Dr. Breddit" - add a fun note that he likes to be called 'dr.' but his first name because Briadwood encourages first-name basis.
Book2 Timeline
- 6th day of 6th month school gets out
- 9th day of the 7th month - Scarlet arrived back home
- 24th day of the 8th month - Scarlet's birthday
- 2nd of 9th month - school starts
Chapter 1
- 13th day of 8th month - Night introduction, book starts.
- 14th day of 8th month - knighting with King
- 15th day of 8th month -
- meeting with new school principle
- First therapy appointment - if she's 14 in this scene, its after the 24th day of the 8th month
- Meeting with Antiquarian Society - Some revision required, school hasn't started yet.
Chapter 2
- 16th day of 8th month - Forging scene with Nal, could be day after chapter 1/dinner same night - editing Scarlet finding out DeLarual's are moving in.
Chapter 3
- 17th day of 8th month - night time, Scarlet catches Relend in her room, sleeps next to Nal
- 19th day of 8th month - leaving for camping trip, arrival at camp site, scarlet hurts face & kills bear
- 20th day of 8th month - The following morning, the various denizens. Scarlet gets fish heads tossed on her. Relend gonna die.
- 23rd day of 8th month - camping trip over heading home.
Chapter 4
- 25th day of 8th month - Scarlet's birthday dinner
- 29th day of 8th month - Kicking Relend out, second therapy visit
- 2nd day of the 9nth month - first day of school
- 5th day of 9th month - presentation to antiquarians
- 6th day of 9th month - chat with Willy
Chapter 5
- 6th day of 9th month - visit from Naomi
- 7th day of 9th month - day out with Tess
- 8th day of 9th month - Naomi leaves(no actual story)
Chapter 6
- 12th day of 9th month - therapy
- 13th day of 9th month - brings Nal to school, team meeting
- 16th day of 9th month - heavy sword tryouts
- 17th day of 9th month - lunch with friends
- 21st day of 9th month - gala
Chapter 7
I have between the 17th day of the 9th month and the 14th day of the 12th month for chapters 7-10 to happen:
- Awkward convo with Joe, gets tablet for languaging
- presentation to class of expensive books/discovery of note
- failed attempt to stay home for "Eieber Day" (note: this will fix a birth date for him)/heavy sword practice montage/visit with espy(big day)
Chapter 8
- Scarlet tells teacher about book, gets info on note- rewrite this scene
- Research in lab could be same or next day
- showing Jason around her study - this has to be a saturday/letter writing to Tess
Chapter 9
- school field trip, truth or dare
- next day, chat with okin
- some days later, back in Arindell at museum, in research lab later that evening
- Scene with Nal up a tree, need to revise
Chapter 10
- Visit with Tortuga
- Days or weeks later, meeting with master auramancer and getting Nal back
- 14th day of 12th month - knowledgium championships
Chapter 11
- 21st day of 12th month - Heavy Sword finals, Chapter 11 starts
- 22nd day of 12th month - "Scarlet made an annoyed sound in her throat"
Chapter 12
- 2nd day of 1st month - "It took ten days to cross the spur" Note: should i bother mentioning it was Wash day? Nal and Scar dont care but relend might.
- 8th day of 1st month - "“All right,” Scarlet announced. “You two sacks of crap stay here and try not to kill each other. I should be back in four or five days, a week, tops.”"
- 9th day - "She sheltered for the first night "
- 10th day - "Though it was only late afternoon, Scarlet camped at the tree-line on the second day."
- 11th day - "At morning on the third day" - ends in "The wind picked up when the sun set"
- 12th day - "Scarlet’s eyes were bloodshot and her face felt wind-burned by the time the first rays of the sun crept above the ridgeline to the east. "
- 13th day - "It was late morning when Scarlet set out the following day"
- 16th day of 1st month - "Scarlet paused to site on a few land marks"
- 17th day of 1st month - "It took all morning to catch a few birds"
- 18th day of 1st month - "They spent another full day filling their packs"
Chapter 13
Need check map, back in Uddin
Need revision, chapter is too long(12,000 words). may split into 2 chapters.
Chapter 14
good length at 8,000 words
Chapter 15
Needs work, few scenes need filling in
Chapter 16
Needs to be broken into 2 chapters